A 5-Minute Guide to More Persuasive Copywriting

A 5-Minute Guide to More Persuasive Copywriting

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  1. Really great advise! I was also taught this in speech class in college. But like all good wisdom, it helps to be reminded of this from time to time.

    Next time I write a blog post I will think of somebody specific I can write to. I will also try this when I teach lessons outside of the blogging world.

    Thanks, and have a great Christmas!

    • Writing for a specific person is exactly what I do, Mel. And that specific person is my best friend.

      She is NOT in my target market, but she’s perfect as the person I imagine writing to. Why? Precisely because she’s not my target. Meaning she doesn’t know the lingo of the trade. Meaning I have to use layman’s terms. Meaning I have to make my posts easy to understand and interesting enough so she won’t tell me to shut up and move on.

      An example: I just looooove this radio talk show called “Car Talk” on NPR. Now I am not a mechanic and I don’t care about cars, but brothers Tom and Ray make their show so enjoyable that someone like me who is totally not their target audience tune in every week to laugh along, feel like a part of a special community, and learn a little something new about car repair. They make talking about car repair fun. Imagine that!

      Now that’s what I call persuasive. Radio may be a different medium, but the principle is the same. Captivate and connect with your audience on a personal level, and you won’t have to think so hard about who your “ideal” reader is. Personally, I don’t think there is such a thing as an “ideal” reader. And if you only write for your “ideal” reader, you might miss out on a much wider audience.

    • Hi Mel – I hadn’t thought about the connection to speaking. I heard the great pianist Artur Rubinstein always picked out someone in the audience as he walked onstage for a concert. Then he played that concert for that one person. It was personal, and he was the only one who knew it. Yet he was renowned in the classical music world for giving amazing live performances.

      It seems like James is saying something very similar — or even exactly the same — but applied to a different “art form”. Happy holidays!

  2. It is always easier and more effective to be focused in your copy. For sure, the spectre of the generic customer type won’t help you cut through. However, the danger many writers fall into is to create a customer persona on too little information (or worse, simple wish-fulfilment).

    Dorothea might exist. She may be an entirely accurate picture of the target market. But then again, she may be the exception. It’s important to be accurate about your chosen persona (and not just create an interesting character you’d like to write for). Otherwise you might write a utterly compelling piece of copy for someone who, frankly, is not important to your business’s success.

    • Well, hopefully the writer’s done his or her research and made sure the piece is written to the rule, not the exception!

      Good point on the self-fulfillment, by the way. I see many, MANY people write to themselves… and not to their actual target market.

    • That’s definitely a danger, but I also think that writing with a human being in mind always produces clearer, more conversational copy. Even when the avatar isn’t a great match for the actual buyer, the reader picks up on a more personal tone and the writing works better.

      But obviously, keeping someone in mind who’s actually going to buy will work better. 🙂

  3. I love the advice to pick a person and write to them. I started doing that recently in my blog and it is amazing how much simpler it was to write that way. And the posts read better and are much more to the point. I write about manging the financial side of a business so not everyone is ready for that. Once I started seeing that one specific person I was writing to (who was very interested in that part of their business), everything became so much easier for me. It made a huge difference.

    Thanks for a great post.

  4. Great column — very readable, interesting, pulls you in. The problem when writing for most direct mail campaigns is that you’re writing for Dorothea and Joe and Juan and Portia and, and, and, and … There is no specific persona because you’re hitting a broad market of 500,000+. We’ve been trying lots of different techniques lately. Personally, I think traditional direct mail campaigns have seen their day, but I haven’t convinced anyone of that yet at my company. So, we write for the mindless masses — who don’t even open the envelopes.

    • I disagree – there’s *always* a specific persona you can write to, and if you’re writing for Dorothea, Joe, Juan and Portia, it just becomes dilution, which gets far less results.

      I know it seems hard to write to ONE person when you’re sending your piece out to 500,000+ people, but believe me, it works!

      • Think I agree with James on this one. Write for 500,000+ people and 100 open their males because they have an idea what’s inside. Bloggers building an audience should write for one person from day one, day 1000, and always. Your market is built one person at a time. Chances are that when their number of subscribers hits the 500,000 mark, 400,000 will not only still be opening those mails. They’ll actually be reading them… to the last word!

        • I guess I was talking about direct mail, not writing for my blog: Two totally different things. I have no problem writing to my “so-glad-you-stopped-in” readers on my blog. I shouldn’t have talked about direct mail here. The broad market (specifically, life insurance) is just that — broad.

          • This is actually an old technique from direct mail copywriting, but if your company/agency isn’t acquiring highly targeted lists & adjusting the copy accordingly, it’s definitely hard to put into practice. Even so, I think you can infuse some life and humanity into copy by visualizing a human when you write … you’re still writing for people, not collections of demographic traits. 🙂 Your reader doesn’t have to know precisely what the picture looks like in your head.

  5. I’m thinking that this is the kind of advice that is as old as writing copy. Yet at the same time it is changing the way how brands have to think about their markets.

    The internet and use of social networks have become revolutionary media at the political level in the Middle East. Content marketing with the use of blogs is doing the same in the free world for consumer markets.

    Every major corporation has to pay attention to grass-roots groups and informal clubs that are being formed daily. As bloggers, we know them as “followers” and “email lists.”

    We DO have to know the demographics of our readers. Its a start that helps frame our writing and focuses our content. But its the kind of advice in this post that REALLY helps to build those relationships and makes raving fans out of a mere list of subscribers. I want to be a mover and shaker because I think I have a lot to offer that large numbers of people desperately NEED. This is why I started to write and blog. Nothing less will do. James, THANK YOU for a key piece of the puzzle I need to get it done. You totally rock!

    • Old advice or new advice… it’s good advice! And one worth stressing because so many people are just starting their business. Every day, new people throw up a website or become self-employed, and all these folk wonder where they should start.

      I think with Dorothea. She’s a good place to start from 🙂

  6. Well done. And I’d guess imagining a conversation with Dorothea as you write your copy would help too.

    P.S. I heard Dorothea wears men’s underpants. Just sayin’! 😉

  7. Great post! I think it’s easy for bloggers to get caught up in the actual writing and forget who they’re writing for (at least on the level that you’re talking about here).

    Knowing your target audience is one of the most basic and critical parts of business, but it’s a task that is ignored by soooo many marketing managers and writers (especially within small businesses).

    Thanks again for a great post!

  8. Nice reminder about writing directly to your niche. I have been taught to even take a step further. I make an avatar of the “person” that I am writing for. I look around google images and find a photo of someone that would fit the bill. Then when I write I look at the picture to help me connect. Thanks for the great post.

    • That’s a brilliant idea, Mike. I like to try to think of an actual person I know, but very often, there’s no one in my extra-small circle, so I visualize an actual image of a target reader in my mind. A picture would be even better!

  9. Mmmmh, am thinking of writing what keeps Dorothea up at night. It’s almost Christmas and she doesn’t have a coin to spare to buy her kids presents…maybe!

    Lovely post James.

  10. Simple, actionable advice. Love it. I do think it’s important that the individual you imagine fits within your target demographic. When I’m writing copy for a sales performance management software product, I wouldn’t want to be writing for Wolfie, my father’s lawn bowls partner who needs a little bit of extra help getting in and out of the car and refuses to wear his hearing aid unless he’s bribed. Wouldn’t work….

    It’s probably implicit in your post…but just thought I’d add.

  11. Love the examples! I sometimes have a hard time making my writing personal, so I will take your tips! @Ruth–Thanks for the great advice on writing to particular person that fits your demographic.

  12. I can get behind every word of this post from experience. I started a company a few years ago with a partner in the commercial cleaning business who had the steam cleaner gear to help people get rid of bed bugs. I knew how people felt because I had to deal with it myself (Gross). So I wrote the entire site to speak to that person in that exact state of mind.

    And it was crazy, it came back that almost 100% of the customers went out of their way to mention “by the way your website is the only one that actually spoke TO us, most of the other companies are just trying to scare us into spending a lot of money, and that just didn’t appeal to us” Or some variation of that.

    It was really awesome – that was my first offline commercial site (bedbudquarantine dot com) and I remember being so excited about copywriting, because it seemed so easy – that all we have to do is speak directly TO people, honestly, respecting their intelligence – and it seemed like that was some sort of secret.

      • Thanks, although I’ve often said it’s knowledge of a subject that I really wish I didn’t ever to fill my brain space with. Gf just shook her head and said “only YOU would start a business out of this”. 😉 I figured it was the best way to recoup the time, money and mental energy I’d spent getting rid of the little blood suckers.

  13. Excellent post. Readers like conversation and if you speak to them with your written word, they feel a bond before deciding to pick up the phone and call. There are several traits to readers, two being the ‘party’ people and the ‘power’ players–you can write to both with your conversation piece and include a photo for the party people and a statistical chart for the power players as well. (I need to focus more on that myself too!)

  14. Very good post which made me realise that I tend to assume that I know what my readers – generically, that is – want, while the truth is that I know what very few of them want. I will keep the latter in mind for my next copy.

  15. Its funny, I was just doing some research on my competition in a new market & wow. There was no CONNECTION at all.

    Read this. Read on. Do that. Gimme your email.

    Do some site owners forget that there are ACTUAL REAL PEOPLE coming to there website with all sorts of emotions…..fear, pain, urgency, regret.

    Good copy is the act of empathizing with your audience by UNDERSTANDING them (this takes work) then delivering a useful solution in a way that is harmonious and leaves both parties feeling better for it.


    Great post.

  16. Great advice! I learned this at a branding agency early in my career and it has been a key to every campaign I’ve worked on since. It helps me stay focused and it keeps me from being distracted by the new, shiny toys that my target audience does not care about.

    Plus, it’s easier to connect with a person versus a demographic.

  17. Great article James. I’ve used this technique for as long as I’ve been writing copy and I totally agree with you. Went to your site and signed up for the mailing list, only to learn it’s just a waiting list. A little bummed about that, but looking forward to when it opens up. Thanks for the great post.

  18. When I teach this, students and clients push back. They are terrified that everyone except Dorothea will feel excluded. I use two examples to help them understand why this isn’t so.

    1. We–or at least some of us–read books of letters from someone we admire to people we don’t know. Why? Because we respond viscerally to that which is written to a specific human being.

    2. Great speakers know to make and sustain for a few seconds eye contact with individuals in the audience. B doing this, they make everyone–including the hundreds with whom they can’t make direct eye contact–feel like they are being spoken to directly.

  19. We market to real people, so it goes naturally that we gotta think and write like real people. You gotta think and decide who you are writing to. Personal, personal, personal! Very good post.

  20. I’ll bet you most people (guilty myself) often guide their writing based on who is talking in their head, instead of who they are talking to. It’s a poor guide since everyone will replace that talking voice with a voice of their own, which may be a completely wrong fit for what you wrote. I’m going to work on this.

  21. This post fits my learning perfectly. I’m just reading Peter Guber’s Tell to Win, and his entire premise is that the power of telling a compelling story helps you connect with people’s emotions and desires.

    Telling a story requires you to talk to a real person.

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